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Chapter 1 Part 1 English and  Espanish by Yumoe Chapter 1 Part 1 English and  Espanish by Yumoe
:bulletblack: Este sera el OFICIAL comic de la historia de Yuki y mis personajes , Este sera el definitivo , Se que hice un par antes [link], pero tomenlo como un prototipo :3 .Alfin de luego de 2 años ,podre plasmar esta idea en un comic QWQ , estoy Muy emocionada por continuarlo (ya mismo estoy haciendo la siguiente pagina) , Ya decidi por una historia definitiva :D, luego de dos años xD , Cuando cree a yuki , lo primero que pense fue hacer un comic , pero las ideas eran muy malas, luego de jugar un par de videojuegos , pude organizarme e inspirarme de ellos >u<, especialmente Disgaea Y Touhou :D

:bulletblack: Necesito un ayudante para traducirlo al ingles TWT , estoy llendo a clases particulares solamente para mi comic e.eU , les agradeceria mucho para quien lo traduzca :)

:bulletblack: Leia: Contraseña? Cual contraseña? D:>

(c) Art/ Characers/ History By me :iconyumoe:
No bases No traces No copy

English Version! :squee:

Leia: Nen! its me i received The report , Open the doors after you know Get Angry...
Nen: Who are You? strange? , a demon? a succubus? , a vampire? butterfly? Rat with wings? , access denied!... i want the password , or your pass has denied..
Leia: NEN ITS ME!! , IM NOT A STUPID VAMPIRE! AND ANY STUPYD RAT WITH WINGS! , wait! , Why butterfly?!!
Nen: For your wings...
Leia: You think are the wings of a butterfly?!!
Nen: is as it seems...
Leia: Wait! that is not the case!!! Open the doors!!
Nen: i want a password...
Leia: We Havent a password!!
Nen: just invented a password...

Reupload it, because, the pic are small ._.
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:iconlicorice85:
LICORICE85 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
me encanta la de pelo mono
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:iconagx2300:
Agx2300 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
la parte de la contraseña me recuerda a loony toon show
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:iconadickson10193:
ADickson10193 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
this is amazing comic. :)
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:iconsqueezybear:
SqueezyBear Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm just learning Spanish...but muy bien....me gusta dibujamos...
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:iconiloveadventuretime20:
Iloveadventuretime20 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Pues acabo de inventer una jejejejejej esa parte me mato XD XD
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:iconbutchercup144:
Butchercup144 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student
Tierna!!!!
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gracias! >u<
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:iconbutchercup144:
Butchercup144 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student
De nada
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:iconsoacwa:
SoacWA Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Me recuerda mi hermanito... siempre me hace cosas como esa cuando tengo prisa.
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD, ella esta inspirada en nuestros hermanos o3o (?)
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:icondeadly-love123:
deadly-love123 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
eso es ser um mega trooll xD!!!! me gusta owo
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD, esa es la habilidad de Nen creo xD
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:icondeadly-love123:
deadly-love123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
SUPER TROOLL ? 

genial xD 
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:iconshololu:
Shololu Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OOOO te salio igual al estilo de bleedman se nota que te esforzaste mucho en todo detalle esta lo mas sigue así
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gracias :3
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:icong-blue16:
G-Blue16 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
bueno yo dije antes q qeria ayudarte con lo del ingles .3. ...
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh, yo lo habia olvidado Q_Q Lol siento T_T , si quieres puedes traducir la siguiente pagina , que aun no lo acabo
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G-Blue16 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
jajaj te lo abia dicho hace mucho en un comentario solo una vez pero no me respondiste creo ^^u....bueno si me dieras tu c orreo asi hablariamos y te diría como seria el texto .3.
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmm ok o3o, te lo envio por nota, pero aun no termino la parte 2, pero si quieres puedes corregir algunos dialogos de este ^^U
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:iconarmitedis:
Armitedis Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Kyaaa!!!!! me encanta esta algo comico pero igual me encanta
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Muchas Gracias :D, aunque la idea es que sea comico o3o
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:iconarmitedis:
Armitedis Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ya quieroo leer los demas capitulos =3
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:iconimass21:
Imass21 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Somebody is a fan of bleedmans work
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohh Really? xD , yep i am
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:iconthaliablood:
thaliablood Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xDDD me encanto >w<
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me alegro de que te halla gustado xD
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:iconluisantoniobarrera:
LuisAntonioBarrera Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
esta ¡BUENO! :D
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gracias! xD
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:iconmiku01234:
MIKU01234 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
jajajajajajajaja rata con alas XD
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD, es la definicion de un murcielago creo xD
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:iconmiku01234:
MIKU01234 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
jejeje que cosa y eso que no se parecen en nada XD
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:iconyokokinawa:
YokoKinawa Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Chica, sin sonar grosera pero también necesitas kien te ayude con la ortografía.... No hay ni un sólo diálogo ke esté al 100% escritao correctamente :/...

En fin, suerte con tu cómic....

Por cierto, me agradó la chikita rubia, está simpática...
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh! Muchas Gracias por el aviso! >.> ,lo tendre en cuenta la proxima vez, no me havia dado cuenta ._., creo que la mayor parte , son por los acentos T3TU
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:iconratsuterra48:
RatsuTerra48 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahahahaha
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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:iconvc667:
vc667 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehee Nen is so adorable :iconeweplz:
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You! xD
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:iconvc667:
vc667 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome
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:iconc0c0chan:
C0C0Chan Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Nen es una troll XD
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol , a si es ella xD
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:icondragons119:
Dragons119 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
jajajajajaja
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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:iconjosit:
josit Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nen es tierna :3

me encanto :3
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gracias! xD
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:iconjosit:
josit Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
denada xD
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:iconzoqi13:
zoqi13 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
jaj Nen se ve muy tiena owo
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD gracias o3o
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:icongrimtales29:
GrimTales29 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!! Lo amooo!! Sus ojos :heart: asdasdas, y me reí con: '' Crees que son las alas de una mariposa niña??!!'' LOOOOL xDDD
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:iconyumoe:
Yumoe Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD me alegro de que te halla gustado! o3o , quizas nen te haga reir mas en la siuiente pagina >w>
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:icongrimtales29:
GrimTales29 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL la esperaré con ansias xD
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